Dance With Me Scream even though they won’t hear you Take my hand and don’t let go Stay and don’t let me fall through I love you more than you know We will watch the fire burn And you’ll hold me close and say Soon we’ll get the life we earned And we’ll rid those in the way A dreamland so distorted A dream where you won’t awake We are a disease that has spread We have a bond you can’t break Dance with me my lovely king Can’t you hear the voices sing? |
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A sonnet written for school, BEHOLD! owo Kay so it took about two friggin' hours to figure out what I was going to write because I was having a breakdown because my english teacher keeps demanding we write poem after poem and he's like, stomping on my inspiration
  Not cool ewe; But yeah after finally figuring out what I was going to write and listening to like fifty different songs to help me get the idea of what mood I was going to try and create in it it took me like twenty minutes to write  It's not even my best xD; But yeah there you go o3o I liek it enough xDOh yes and I have like... six other poems, which I do plan to post, little by little though so I don't flood your deviations box xD And they're saved on another computer so I don't have them here ono But don't worry they'll get up there o3o So enjoy ^^v ((Oh and this is my first real sonnet...like...thing, so I'd appreciate some helpful critique o3o)) Comments
 GODSDAMMIT....
-- people are people. age, race, gender, sex, orientation, opinions, language, it doesn't matter. we breath, we exist, lets make this world a better place for everyone.  its reallly gooood.....
 i will try critique you in a few min because im slightly awestruck.... If this is for school it deserves an A+++!
 What was your motivation?-- Following a path of regret and sorrow Running away from the monsters that follow. This illusion has become reality And no one can stop the fatality Only the hero who hangs in the gallows Could have saved us from these hallows. -Scythe  amazing, sunset!! and please tell me mr. mccloskey gave you a freaking 300! xD
-- They say "Guns don't kill people, people kill people." Well I think the guns help. If you stood there and yelled BANG, I don't think you'd kill to many people.  x3 Amazing as always!
-- {{あかみ}} I mean as much as a piece of paper to you. {{アカミ}} "°º¤ø„¸¨"°º¤ø„¸¸„ø¤º°"¨¸„ø¤º°"¨ ¨"°º¤ø„¸ ~Gejutsu wa~¸„ø¤º°"¨ ¸„ø¤º°"¨ ~~Bakuhatsu da!!~~~ ``"°º¤ø„¸ ¸„ø¤º°"¨¸„ø¤º°"¨¨"°º¤ø„¸¨"°º¤ø Yay thank you o3o
-- You are my evil angel~  >w< Yay!! Thank you o3o <3
-- You are my evil angel~ Yay thank you >w<
Well I was listening to that song with the Alices... Shadow's probably shown you, and it reminded me of a deluded dream like world and murder... and all that other fun stoof so yeah o3o -- You are my evil angel~ Is that good? owo
-- You are my evil angel~ |
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