Ugly Brown eyes, perfection See them in my reflection I say I hate you But I'm lying In lies drowns sorrow There will be no tomorrow Because my deceit Turned them away Long locks, perfection There is never affection For the lying bitch Who wants it all Nice face, perfection My body is deception "But all your lies have Made you ugly." |
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Edit: Sorry about that o3o I changed the 'in your reflection' to 'in my reflection' because she's supposed to be looking at herself, the only part said by someone else is the last two lines in quotes xD
Not my best work o3o; But I was trying to try something a little new. Not great, but I'm kind of pleased with it xD Plus I havn't been writing enough poetry : P Sorry to the people who watched me because of my poetry >A< Some of these lines have been floating around in my head for a while, so I'm glad I got them down :3 I'll try to write more often xD Comments
 Awesome job! o3o
i like the end!  Thanks~
-- You are my evil angel~   I really like this, it's very relatable for a lot of people, I think.
-- If wanting to get into someone's pants was love, then Francis' heart would've exploded by now. Thanks and thanks for the fave xD
-- You are my evil angel~  Wonderful job, I also love the ending.
--  Cross my heart and hope to diePlease stick a needle in my eye To keep me blinded to the sight When Punkinhead appears tonight "Be yourself, because the people who mind don't matter, and the people who matter don't mind"-Dr. Seuss Thanks x3
-- You are my evil angel~ No problem x3
-- Cross my heart and hope to diePlease stick a needle in my eye To keep me blinded to the sight When Punkinhead appears tonight "Be yourself, because the people who mind don't matter, and the people who matter don't mind"-Dr. Seuss Np o3o
 I love the last...verse? IDR what it's called. ;; But I love the last part! c:
Nice work. n__n <3 -- ｢･T-t-take off~ Tell me why? Tell me why? 『Otona』ni narutte koto ga Tell me why? Tell me why? Itsuka wakaru no kana~♪･｣ |
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